Overall, I found the ad somewhat convincing, but improvements can be made.
The ad "Thanks to Modern Science..." obviously caught the attention of the citizens of New York, but the amount of attention aside, the ad's influence over the citizens could have been greater. Yes, the writer states the incidents with Ronald Keith Williamson and Anthony Porter, but when speaking of the twenty-three falsely executed people, the readers are left in the dark when it comes to details on these cases. It gives the reader reason to doubt the validity of the writer's accusations and facts.
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